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Passion  Open in new Window. [E]
Just to say something for today.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Star! I am reviewing this because today is your 1st Anniversary at Writing.com. *Smile* And I hope you have many more!

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*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* Passion does burn into the mind, I agree. Nice way to begin this piece.

         *Bulletg* Nicely written and flows well.

         *Bulletp* Okay, so I have to be honest. I think I may have misinterpreted this piece. *Facepalm* I truly thought it was about passion between humans. But then I noticed one of your genre categories was Nonsense; (the other is Personal.) And your item cover is that of a cat. So...I'm not exactly sure what to think. Is it about the cat? But no matter, your words are well written, and I noticed no spelling, grammar, or spelling errors. *Smile*


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         This is only a thought, as it's not incorrect if you choose to write it all in one line, but you might consider breaking it up. Of course this is entirely up to you. *Wink*

         Your title summary reads Just to say something for today. You might want to change that, but again, it's up to you. *Wink*


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         I liked this piece very much, but I'm still a bit confused about the cat and the Nonsense category. You could always add Romance as a genre, if indeed it's about a relationship, but again, I'm unsure. But your words are lovely, at any rate! *Heart*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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