Hi Mary,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, someone explains why they preferred Lillith to Eve. I love poems and stories that use biblical figures in different contexts. Putting these two in a passionate context is very enticing. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.