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 Stage Kiss Open in new Window. [E]
Unrequited love after falling in love with costar
by Niki Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Firework* Positives

I thought you did a really great job of conveying a story full of emotion in this poem. With just a few short lines and a handful of words, you were able to pack a ton of complexity into the narrator's emotions surrounding her first kiss.


*Firework* Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement come to mind. I thought you did a great job!


*Firework* Overall

Overall, this was an engaging, entertaining poem to read. Nicely done!


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