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 We are like leaves in the wind Open in new Window. [E]
Poem in the style of Thich Nhat Hanh's poetry.
by Nadnerb Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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In many ways, our lives are compared to leaves in the wind. The wind can be gentle, causing good travels, or they can be rough, making the journey risky. As we travel in this manner, in both good and bad, we seek to find our own way, in spite of the wind. Most of the time, we tend to do so. Sometimes though, we are surprised at how the journey has changed us.

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An interesting poem to read.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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