Hi Shawn,

This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with vivid description of a very desolate space. The reader is wondering why this type of room is being entered by anyone. They will read on to find out. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They want to know exactly who this woman is being held captive by. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)One by one, a dozen locks were until the solid door pushed open.-There seems to be a word missing here.

The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.