Hi Pericles,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of disappointment and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has lost someone they love but are willing to still look for the beauty in life. I am hoping that the speaker will find love and happiness in the future. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.