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 The Indifferent Sea. Open in new Window. [E]
A short poem about the sea and her indifference to both you and me.
by Pericles Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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The sea, she can be a cruel mistress. In this case, a hundred souls have perished, their vessel, now a tomb, is now sunk deep into a watery grave, never to surface again. This happens to plenty that pick the sea as a way of life. Sometimes it happens to one, sometimes to many. One might wonder what happens to the souls of those that have such a fate. One has to think.

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I wonder what was the inspiration behind this poem. Was it merely an act of nature, or was there more behind it.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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