This looks like the start of an interesting story. Some kids would like to go to the local doughnut store to get some heavily discounted doughnuts. However, the one has noticed that it is starting to rain, in a rather strange way. Things get more strange as they decide to get on their bikes to go for a ride. It is clear that this rain is more than just green.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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