Hi nacky,

This is a fantastic article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. Anyone who travels a great deal will anxiously begin to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the evolution of the Luggage Industry over the years. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make is comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. The you a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.