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Crabapple Tree  [E]
a poem about childhood summer days
by D.B.
Review of Crabapple Tree  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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There are days we like to look back on our childhood, and think about those special moments. For me, it's a spot along the creek. My little brother and I would grab some towels, put on the swim shorts, run down there, and play in that cold water on a hot day...... good times. In your case, there was a swimming pool that you liked to visit, and along the way was a crabapple tree, that you loved picking fruit off of. Know the feeling.

Thoughts
Makes one think about their childhood.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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