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  |  | Castle's Chessboard  [E] Random Writing, Blogs and Adventures  |
| (5.0)   Greetings, KingsSideCastle! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" .  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.Prompt: "WRITE A POEM ABOUT SOMETHING WORTHLESS."  The Positives/What I Liked What a great idea for this prompt! I'm impressed with the vision you've come up with: an empty, discarded candy wrapper (preferably Starburst because that's one of your favorite candy  ) Your imagery is amazing, showing us the colorful, waxy, crumpled paper flying in the breeze with no set destination. You also describe it as once being a guardian, protecting the sweet prize within. I love this!  I think my favorite line is: Ensuring a moment of joy to the one who unwrapped it   Great choice on the centering of this piece, along with the font, font size (I appreciate this, thank you!), and line-spacing. Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderStanza 2: Line 1: It worthless now  It's worthless now Final ThoughtsThis is great. I definitely will look at discarded candy wrappers in another light from now on! Thank you for sharing. Nice work. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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