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Positives
I enjoyed this poem. I thought you did a particularly good job of using the prompt words and working them into the poem in a naturalistic and eloquent way. Given the number of words and the brevity of the poem, that's really impressive.
Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
I thought you did a great job on this poem. Well done!
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