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 | A Cross Limerick, untitled  [E] Getting a lot of poetic miles out of my slip and fall in the bathtub.  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, Tinker! I am reviewing this because this is your account birthday month and I'm taking part in this month's "Anniversary Reviews" .  I'm so glad I picked this item to review today because it was such a pleasure to read! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I've never heard of a cross-limerick, but I love it! I just might try my hand at it, though hopefully, I won't need to break my hand first, as you did.   I like how you used your slip and fall in the bathtub experience to write this! It's an amazing piece, truly! I believe my favorite line is: self em-bare-assed, up she rose like a clown.  Sorry. Don't mean to laugh, but I love what you did here, with the play on thte word embarrassed.  It's perfect! Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI've nothing to suggest other than trying not to fall in the bathtub again.  Final ThoughtsThis piece was sooooo enjoyable to read. I know that doesn't sound very nice, but you've taken a lemon and made lemonade out of a bad situation. You are quite crafty and very talented. Thank you for sharing! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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You responded to this review 06/22/2024 @ 6:04pm EDT