Need a bottle or two of soda to read this one. You have someone talking about their dreams, how they always change due to trouble of one sort or another. Can be a little confusing, due to current format, and potentially it's length, but it's still an interesting item to take a look at, and say something about.

Thoughts
An interesting item to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar. However, in most poems, the first letter of each line tends to be capitalized, along with the "i"s themselves being capitalized. Now, if this is done as a style or personal choice, disregard this.

Suggestion
Most poems tend to have 4-6 lines in a related group, with a space between groups, to make reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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