Hi Soul sister

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Positives

I liked the overall message of this letter. You did a great job of covering the basics of how one goes about achieving salvation from a Christian theological standpoint, and emphasizing some clear steps that individuals can take to accept Jesus.


Suggestions

In my experience, just telling people that they are sinners and in need of repentance is a difficult way to reach the lost. Given the brevity of this piece, I think it would be better to focus on why Jesus is worth following or learning more about. Getting someone to accept (or even see) their own faults can be really complicated and, while this piece may speak to those who know they fall short, it might have a difficult time reaching those who think they're already good people and don't have a need for salvation.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read and thought you did a great job with this letter. Nice work!


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Jeff
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