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 Spring Time Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about Spring
by lefty690 Author Icon
Review of Spring Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi lefty690,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your feelings about Spring. I love Spring. It is the season right before my favorite season-Summer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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