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Review #4758499
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Blogocentric Formulations Open in new Window. [18+]
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by Jeff Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Summer Olympics" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello, Jeff! Thank you for supporting this great activity!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
This is an insightful and thought-provoking response to the prompt while remaining succinct and on topic.

*Checkb*Title and Description:
The title is plain and straightforward, but it does allow the reader to understand what they're heading into. As a side note, I quite enjoy the title of your blog. It's unique and piques the reader's interest.

*Checkb*Content and Flow:
Your writing style is to the point without sacrificing audience engagement. You've outlined your arguement clearly, and backed up your opinion well by using examples from other sporting events and venues.

I agree with your assertion that the sporting side of the Olympics remains commendable even if the business side is suspect. Additionally, the idea of a host country with spread out events makes sense, but the boardroom suits surely bristle at the perceived lack of spectacle. Still, it appears it would be far less wasteful - both financially and environmentally - to spread the events out to locations best suited to host them, as well as offering up a greater economic reward to a larger number of people.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
As usual, I found no errors. Your prompt response unfolds logically and is entertaining.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the upcoming Olympic games. It's a quick and smart read and I enjoyed reading your opinion.


Thank you for sharing your work with us!

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