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 | Stand aside  [13+] Difficult to be helpless  |
| (5.0)| An Angel Army Review Hi Whiskersandhersisters . I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Stand aside" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. If I read your premise correctly, we all need help from above ... at one time or another. Often we just run around, moving from one place to another, doing one thing or another at the same time often spinning our wheels.I agree that we need help. But it's human nature to want to fulfill a task or satisfy a need or just find your own way. Life is a series of steps taken and tasks completed that shapes our lives. Why is it that we must be beaten down and without hope before we ask for help. When I was much younger, I was caught up in the whole "What did you do today, Honey?" The kids were running around and the house was unkempt. Deep down I knew she wasn't just laying around all day. Effort and grace is needed to overcome such accusations. Perhaps we don't need to hit rock bottom. A steady diet of God's voice can guide you slowly.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. I found no obvious grammar or spelling issues. Not bad for an item written and posted but never edited.  My Rating. 5.0.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 06/24/2024 @ 2:35pm EDT