Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. Poem is about the current state of our world, the chaos, treachery, and, sometimes, the people that live a good life. I do hope we can create a better world one day. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.