Hi phoenixrises

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion.


Positives

Overall, I really enjoyed this item. Having lost a few really important people in my life myself, I definitely empathized with your experience and your perspective. Nice work!


Suggestions

The only two suggestions that I have are technical ones. About partway through the item the font size changes and gets noticeably bigger, and there's also a large amount of white space between the end of your item and the bottom of the page. I'd recommend deleting that extra space, and finding a uniform font size (I actually prefer the larger one for readability). Other than that, I thought you did a great job!


Overall

I thought you did a great job with this item!


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Jeff
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