\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4760108
Review #4760108
Viewing a review of:
 Death Happens Open in new Window. [ASR]
Monologue - A person recounts a debate getting out of hand.
by Dreamward Bound Author Icon
Review of Death Happens  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
It is a good writing. I must admire that effort but it is not a Flash Fiction. It becomes a Monologue. The Monologue is a thought opinion of a single speaker. The speech is uninterrupted. Like here, the speaker shares the self-experience of difficulty in burying a body which he certainly didn't know at least a year ago.
It doesn't follow the characteristics of a Flash Fiction. A few conversations will also bring the required pace which is a demand of every Flash Fiction.
You are most welcome on our site.
Keep writing.

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 07/02/2024 @ 12:45pm EDT
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4760108