Hi HollyMerry,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I was very interested in the progress of your writing career, and I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given a synopsis of your latest book and the links where it is available. All but your Amazon link work. You will have to check with Amazon. I was delighted with the look I got at your latest project. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.