Hi Ink Fluttre,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with sorrow and disappointment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is heart broken by the loss of someone they love but is holding on to the hope of finding new love. I hope that the speaker will find someone else to love them. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.