Whoa, what an ending. Yeah after that I wouldn't want to see either. I hope it doesn't work with braile. at some point things could get bad if other senses start taking over for that missing vision. I suggest you make it clearer earlier that the things don't necessarily appear directly in front of her so the monster appearing in the barn isn't as jarring. Or did the monster appear in front of her and find it's way into the barn. I wasn't clear on that. It is a really good story that was the only thing that bothered me even a little bit in the structure of it. The whole story bothered me a whole lot just because it was supposed to. It really is creepy thinking of all the things she could have made appear...