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 Successor to the Game  Open in new Window. [E]
A flash fiction piece about a grandfather playing chess with his granddaughter.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A cute story involving a grandfather and his granddaughter, as the two of them engage in a weekly game of chess. The grandfather helps the child out when they lose, helping them to understand what happened, slowly nurturing a love for the game. In time, the child grows up, becoming a mother herself, still loving the game that she has with her grandfather. A very cute story to read.

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The characters seem interesting.

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I don't see issues with spelling or grammar.

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