Hi Dhanush,

This is a fantastic piece. The title poses a direct question to the reader asking them to rate this piece. This says the piece is very important to you. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written a copy head for a product, like a thermos. The copy head is straight forward and gives the reader enough information to get them wanting to know more about the New Thermos 500. Any customer will want to see this product. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.