Hi Stam,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and filled with pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is plagued with a low self worth. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to value themselves more. I read to the final word to see if this happed. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.