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Review #4762544
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole
         Review for entry/chapter: "Hope in the Feet of a Child" 
Review by Monty
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a fine write. Right away I think you are much younger tan me because I remember so well when I was young and there was no snoopy but I to had my favorite character. The rhythm is fine in each and every line.. I read it over twice just because I liked it. No other reason I could see a small boy that was a friend of snoopy's.
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