Hi Jaweria,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with awe. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who admires the beauty of the night sky and wishes they could touch it. I love how the stars sparkle and the moon shines at night. It is certainly gorgeous. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.