Hi sebs,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how we hold to our ideals but still fail to perform as the rest of the world thinks we should. I just do what I can and not think about what others think of me or what I do. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.