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 I dreamt of a nightly light Open in new Window. [E]
Of the dance of romance
by sebs Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem dedicated to finding love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Great heartfelt expression throughout the poem.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There are rythmes but no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Romance is a dance For it is “friendship set to music" The description is more of an emotional one. Implying romance is a dance, a dance has high points and low points, and yet the dance starts with friendship and grows. This is the type of description that invites the reader to go a little deeper on the meaning and not read it face value.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening starts as a letter, with "Dear Love," implying a certain amount of intimacy and encouraging us to read more. The title fits the poem. Nice expression.

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