Oh what a cute story. I had trouble writing this section of the wonderland challenge, the first time I entered. The second time I chose to write about my dog but it didn't quite fit as well. I really like the bit about the man thanking his wife for the answer since he could not speak the language. If only the author had defaulted to english they would have had an easier time to communicate. But then given the setting that would be an egotistical assumption that the couple would be english speakers. I would suggest doing something more visual to separate the prompt from the story. perhaps a larger or smaller font or a different color. It is not a critical change but it would be more aesthetic for me.