Hi Florence,

This is a wonderful article. You launch into the article by sharing your experiences with reviewing. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the article. They will read to the last word. You have have written about how to avoid giving confusing reviews. The reader is delighted with the insight you give them about reviewing. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. There was one issue I had with this article:

1)The title has nothing to do with what the subject of the article. I mention it because it is misleading, and the reader might skip over reading it because they might feel it will not give them the help they need. If you need clarification on this point email me. This is just how I know how to put this in a nut shell.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.