I loved the flow of this poem. written in un rhymed couplets where the last word of the couplet is the first word of the next two lines. It is very stream of consciousness. this poem feels effortless but I could defintely see the difficulties in writing it. A lot of thought probably went into how it would flow.

This poem really covers the realities and emotional landmines of social media. Reading this and pretending i don't know what it is about I question why anyone would put themselves through that kind of torture. If someone from before social media wouldn't understand it in the least. I hate that this is what our whole culture measures itself by. Makes me want to convert to the Amish lifestyle and religion.

I would suggest combining all of the author's notes into one dropnote to remove some of the clutter.