THis is a cool sounding story. Ryan seems a natural born hero. `This has so many ways it could go from here and I would be interested in reading more of it. One slight thing though it would be easier to read if you put extra returns in between paragraphs. THey all ran together for me and I had to reread in several places to find the right completion of a sentence. the font size is pretty good, fairly readable but the lines run together an awful lot. Also a wordcount would be nice so a person knows how long a read they are signing up for. not that I am complaining, it was a fun read. I love the characters I so want to read more of this story. Everyone in the fantasy land is so kind to Ryan and I wish the real world had a bit more of that.