Hi celia,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. Your topic is fascinating and anyone will anxiously begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion of love in general. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the reasons that people love those that they do and how you will know you are in love. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.