Hi D.K.D.,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of frustration and impatience. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how this cat will wake up his owner. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a cat who wants his morning meal and is impatient with his sleeping owner. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people-including the cat. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.