I love it. The contrast between the steamy fantasy and the reality of her husband is absolutely perfect. The imagery from the first part really drew me in and I was ready for it to get hotter rather than beating the heat. I like the element of an all inclusive resort. I admit when the husband accused her of not working I thought it was less a complete fantasy and more the fantasy of a woman working pools side at an all inclusive resort as a towel girl or a waitress. the reality of the situation was much better and definitely grabbed me well. I loved that she argued back that sometimes you write in your head first. I know I do. I tend to have mapped out an entire plot and played around with some ideas for the perfect scenes for a story before I ever even look at paper. At that stage my characters are defined but fluid, I name them but as I play with the idea for days and the original name slips away I give them a new one about the time the name starts sticking I know it is ready to be outlined. I wonder if that is why the adonis has no real name.