Hello, Rhyssa!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Wow! You wrote a heartbreaking pantoum poem about memory loss and a change in relationship status.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You engaged my senses and emotions as I read your pantoum poem about memory loss. I felt like crying by the end. It must have been heartbreaking to go through. My heart goes out to you on the loss of your beloved grandmother. Even though she didn't always recognize you, I suspect she still felt that you loved her.

I was happy to see this poem was recognized for outstanding writing with a beautiful golden awardicon by Fyndorian. It is well deserved.

I thought your description was perfect for this poem about memory loss.

I was also happy to see that your pantoum poem about memory loss has eighteen reviews with an average of five stars. My five star rating will make it nineteen. You deserve it.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your emotional family poem.

I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this emotional family poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. I couldn't improve upon your writing. I wish that you and your grandmother had had an easier time of things though.


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and I enjoyed reading your emotional family poem, even though it made me sad.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and peace for you.

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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