Hello, Winnie Kay Davis!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Wow! You wrote a fantastic poem that brought me many lovely memories of times at the beach as I read it.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this poem sometime in the past and loved it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "August" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You engaged my senses and emotions as I read this inspirational nature poem of yours. I also feel a beautiful sense of "powerful peace" at the beach. It's one of my favorite places to go.

I was happy to see it won first place in both the Verdant Poetry Contest and the Poetic Traditions Poetry Contest. Congratulations! Those are both contests I always mean to enter. I rarely place though, so I greatly admire those who do! Very well done!

I loved that your thumbnail picture for this inspirational nature poem of yours is perfect for the poem, featuring a lovely beach. I also appreciate that you included a larger version of the image at the top of the poem to make it easier to see and appreciate.

I loved the ending. Probably the last line stanza was my favorite because it is what transformed the poem from nature to nature and inspirational for me.

I appreciated your generous use of a variety of poetic devices. The poem felt as soothing to read as the words were in meaning.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your inspirational nature poem.

I thought the nature and inspirational genres you selected were perfect for this beautiful beach poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your inspirational nature poem again today. It lifted my spirits. Thank you.

Thank you also for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



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