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 Marriage for love Open in new Window. [E]
Why should we marry someone we don't like?
by celia Author Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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What is Love? A very good question. To be fair, the answer eludes me. Can't say that I've ever felt the Romantic sort of love. My older brother wasn't even thirteen when our folks broke up, and when they did remarry/ find a long-term partner, our relationship with the other was complicated. My own brothers have had mixed luck where Love is concerned. Likewise, three of our grandparents died before my older brother was 20, the first being when he was 5, with a second being fairly ill before an accident claimed their life, the third passing from cancer. The closest we might have, that we were able to watch, from a distance, is of a great-uncle and great-aunt, who were married for 50+ years before death finally took our great-uncle a few months back. Maybe that is the sort of thing to look for - being there for each other, in good, and bad, making things work, even when things go wrong.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to think on.

Spelling and Grammar
There are a lot of areas that need work. Some areas need punctuation, some need space between punctuation and the next letter. The first love needs to be capitalized.... that what I can see right away.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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