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The Soundtrack of Little Me Open in new Window. [ASR]
A book to contain all my entries for The Sound-Trackers Activities. Come enjoy listen.
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Greetings and Happy Account Anniversary!

I peeked in your port to celebrate your big day, and immediately went to your Soundtrack entries to get a slice of your music tastes. As an obsessive lover of music, I know how much one can glean from lyrics and melodies, and the types of music someone else enjoys is often a way to get to know them better.

I ran my eye down your list, and I have to admit I don't think I recognized more than two songs, this one and Insensitive. Our tastes probably don't mesh; I'm a sappy sensitive type, and I think *Think* *DragonHead* *DragonHeadB* is edgy... *Blush* *Rolling*

Shinedown's Second Chance is a a song which always fascinated me by the sound of the grunge and the distinctive voice, and the message is something I can relate to deeply.

Your entry is clear, creative and well written, with the inclusion of a little poem of your own creation alongside a sample of lines from the song. I liked reading it and will take a moment to watch the video, though I don't usually watch music videos unless it's from bands I "trust" and even then... But that's a long story *Laugh*

If I had to suggest any improvements, which isn't exactly necessary but I need the practice... I would suggest adding a little more backstory to the song, perhaps the first time you encountered it, or your experience with discovering the band. Or if you know any fun facts about the band or the song itself, that would be a great thing to toss in as well.

As a blog post, however, this is just fine as is. We can see how much you love it, and you've shared that appreciation with us nicely and simply.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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