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Mountain Lion Campout Open in new Window. [13+]
April contest entry for Bard's Hall. After a campout you wake up in a tree. Mt.lion below
by Joseph Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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What's the matter? Cat got your tongue?

Well, in this case, pretty close!

Typical teenage shenanigans - fella goes to a bonfire party, one that someone brought some strong drink to. Next thing he recalls, he's up a tree, with a mountain lion below him. How did he get into this mess? He's not sure. How's he going to get out of it, and not end up in a lion's belly? That's a very good question.

Characters
The characters are very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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