Hello, LBidler!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

You wrote a thoughtful blog post about choosing non-violent ways and following God's way of peace.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You engaged my mind and prayers as I read your thoughtful Christian blog post. I joined you in the prayer at the end. I also prayed for the Lord to bless you, your son, and his work with young people.

I'm reading through the Bible again, but am not up to Judges yet. There's always something to be gleaned from reading God's Word though, even if we're in different sections. Though you wrote this in 2023 so maybe we are reading similar passages right now. I'm in Numbers.

I loved that your heart for the Lord and His peace shined throughout this thoughtful Christian blog post of yours.

I loved the ending the most. It was a great way to wrap up the thoughtful Christian blog post (with prayer).

I thought the spiritual, emotional and opinion genres you selected were appropriate for this thoughtful Christian blog post of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

I think it's just a typo, so it'd be easy to fix if you wanted to do so. In this sentence: "As soon as I read those words, my first reaction was, “Just like today. “Unfortunately, our King, Jesus Christ, seems to be less and less important in many people's lives today." I think the second quote of yours should be attached to "today" instead of "unfortunately." It shows as two opening quotes and no end quotes. So if you made that change, the sentence would then look like this:

"As soon as I read those words, my first reaction was, “Just like today." Unfortunately, our King, Jesus Christ, seems to be less and less important in many people's lives today."

I hope that visual example makes it clear. If I had a paper version it'd be easier to just mark it up. Anyway, it's just a little thing, should you choose to fix it. If not, I'm sure people understand what you mean anyway. Your heart is shining through this piece well.


CONCLUSION:

You have a great heart for the Lord and I greatly enjoyed reading your spiritual blog post.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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