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 Colorful Love Life Open in new Window. [13+]
This details my experience fighting for the love of my life despite family racism.
by Ginger R. Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An African-American woman tries to live her life on her own terms. Her parents want her to marry another African-American, but men of her race don't seem to want her, and she seems to be more interested in those of other races. As she says, even minorities can be racists too. A rather interesting insight into the challenges faced by young women of African ancestry.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a couple of areas where the spelling could be touched on - there's a spot where the word "seen" should be "seem".

Siggestion
Might help if the font was the same, or that the change was limited to the intended areas.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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