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  She will Love you  Open in new Window. [E]
More than No Other Girl. Another in a long line of women I have known and enjoyed.
by Chico Mahalo Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A man spends some time with a woman. They share their likes and dislikes. They talk about the items that the man has, and some of the things he's into. After a while, they soon talk about other things. Soon enough, they head to his room, where things are merely left to the imagination of the reader, the woman simply being just another that the man has known.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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