Hello, Tannus!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your emotional and spiritual poem today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I loved the journey you took and the path you chose with this poem. It shares a great message of choice and personal power.

My favorite line was: "But the angel of virtue whispers in the ear" and I was so happy you listened to that voice. I hope we all can choose virtue more and more.

It's funny though ... there's someone in my life who I think would greatly benefit from this poem and realizing that they have a choice with their anger ... yet that person is the least likely to read a poem. I can always pray for the person and hope though.

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your spiritual poem.

I thought the emotional, self help, and reviewing genres you selected were perfect for this spiritual poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem and am thankful for it's reminders to choose virtue and to pray for others to do so too.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 




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