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 Caleb eats some ice cream Open in new Window. [E]
Caleb eats ice cream which triggers a memory as a kid
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A man serves ice cream to his son and son's friends. As he does so, he reflects upon his youth, and the things he once did. He reminisces about a favorite ice cream stand, what sort of ice cream he wanted that day, or would it be a slushie, about whom he'd chat with, and what all would happen. Nothing like childhood memories.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a number of areas where you have Calebs - this should be Caleb's. A few other spots have similar issues.

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