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Given: Aug 21, 2024 at 9:07pm
Length: 653 Characters |
630 w/o WritingML
A man serves ice cream to his son and son's friends. As he does so, he reflects upon his youth, and the things he once did. He reminisces about a favorite ice cream stand, what sort of ice cream he wanted that day, or would it be a slushie, about whom he'd chat with, and what all would happen. Nothing like childhood memories.
Characters
The characters look interesting.
Spelling and Grammar
You have a number of areas where you have Calebs - this should be Caleb's. A few other spots have similar issues.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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