Feral Cats [13+] In the future, traveling outside can be dangerous. |
As I read this story, I have to chuckle - unless something has seriously gone wrong, there is no way that this story could happen in the USA for one simple reason - those three lions wouldn't last a week out in the wild if they did become Maneaters. After all, us Americans just love our guns. Anyways, three lions seem to be terrorizing a small town, having killed apparently a number of residents. However, it seems that, somehow, these lions were somehow generically modified, and thus are rather unusual. It also seems that there might be more than just three lions out there. Characters The characters seem interesting. Spelling and Grammar I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar. Suggestion Give us a little more of a backstory about how the lions came about - secret military lab, crazed mad scientist that bred them, how they seem to shrug off bullets, and so on. Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night. HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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