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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Forgive me for having a little chuckle, but I'm sure that this, most likely wouldn't happen in the USA. After all, lawyers just love cases where the police just toss innocent folks in prison while violating their basic rights, like that of having an attorney present during any conversation with the police. Heck, fingerprint evidence alone might prove, or rather disprove, guilt in this case. But, I digress.

A young woman gets arrested for a crime she didn't commit. Locked up without even a fair trial, she is abused by other inmates, until one day, she meets a young man, who, likewise, is in there for a crime they didn't do. As a result, the pair plan to escape together.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a few areas where you have a word that, while spelled right, is actually spelled wrong, as you were intending a different word in that spot.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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